All Comments on 'Ally Ch. 02'

I'm a gay woman, but this still made me wet

Like most of your submissions this one just hits the spot. Thanks for sharing it with us.

seems like a strange place to quit. thanks nikki

love the story though,,,,many fantasies running thru my head about john,eve and ally,,,,,nice erotic couplings,,,,,more would be nice,,hint!,,hint!!

Fantastic story Nikki...I can't wait to read more. I hope this story continues.

Ok, I am very turned on by this, since I have experienced this a bit myself. With that said, I would have liked to have see more...lots more. The story was very quick. Slow down a bit, detail, detail, detail.

nice - do continue

Great story but disappointed that there were only two chapters. I wanted to know whether Ally and Eve became a fully fledged couple (I hope so), or did they go their separate ways.

Awesome once again. I'd like to read more chapters on this adventure. Lots of potential chapters with these three characters. Great job. Well written and fun to read. This story could have been expanded on but it was great.

A great flowing story well written

Great story! Looking for the continuation of this threesome. Sounds like the girls are in love with each other and then John is just their stud when they need some dick. Excellent!