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by SexHex

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Frankenstein1962Frankenstein196210 months ago

Nicely done! Wish I had met Nikki at a bar. Cheers. Frankie

KingCuddleKingCuddle10 months ago

Nice. A tidy little grownups mini adventure!

Thanks for sharing!

AndrewMarxAndrewMarx10 months ago

Really well written and your descriptions were entirely believable. I can't believe this is your first story. Please write more

FarmerRon1955FarmerRon195510 months ago

You did such a great job of writing this story that it is hard to believe this is the first you've ever written. Keep up the good work. I hope we have more to look forward to from you. I gave it 5 stars.

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Heya, my name's Nyx. I'm not the most experienced writer but I'm hoping to improve here and learn some tricks along the way :P

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