All Comments on 'Alone'

It is more a psychological portrait than a story.

There are some contradictory things in it.If she needs affection and wants to please her husband, why is she so determined not to share herself with him?

This is a sad story. I gave it a 75 because it is fairly well written but it cries out for continuation.

Also the fact that the author is male I found to be interesting. It is just not the typical story written by a male on this site. And the story is not erotic.