by 69forever
Very erotic and pasionately written. Loved it and can't wait for another installment!
I want to know where your secret beach is. But I know its not near Tennessee so I might as well not even ask.
Very hot 69. Kept me hard all through the story. Am eagerly awaiting the following chapter, as many others are as well. Hope your weekend goes well. I'm sure it will.
Very well written as always your gift for story telling excels when written using your own ideals and desires. Good luck to you, I'm sure chapter 3 will be even hotter!
That story is very hot!! I give it the 5 damp panties award.
Can't wait for Chapter 3....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Well written with a good ending, guess we gotta wait a bit for the next installment
I read the first chapter before I started surfing the Lit boards, so it's doubly nice to read your story now, being a little more familiar with you.
What a hot story! I grew up on the beach and am an exhibitionist as well, so the story stroked my imagination.
I had my hand in my pants during the entire read and did a lot of stroking in that area, too!!
How about a third chapter soon....
Thanks a lot.
Well.....I thought the first story had my panties a little moist. I read part 2 and I think I need to go change them....I hope this isn't all we will here from you. You write incredibly. You have a way of really expressing things....I can only hope that I will be able to reach this level of writing. I look forward to reading more from you.........
great story. one of the best cums i have had. my cock is still hard after cumming. next story please....
loved the first two chapters...can't wait until the other guy joins in...
Yummy, can't wait for ch. 3
I agree with the others wet panties here...
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That was, by far one of the most intense stories I've read on Lit. VERY nice.