All Comments on 'Along Came Natalie'

by Louisestuart

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great 1st story, a long intro, would love a part 2 when you take as much time and give as much detail of the sex x

ShampoofetShampoofetalmost 2 years ago

Beautiful and sexy story. I’m left wanting to know what’s been happening since that day of discovery! Not the messy breakup but your new life and the road you’ve taken! Thank you for sharing xx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Thank you.

Not many stories on literotica are this wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Congratulations on your first story. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I’m going through a similar period in my life. Married but such a crush on a female con worker. I so wish this could happen to me. Thanks so much for your story x

AliceGeeAliceGeealmost 2 years ago

An enjoyable read and I can believe that this is based on a real life event. I find it completely plausible that a previously straight woman could suddenly find herself attracted to another woman, after all it happened to me. Thanks for sharing and a five star rating from me.

LouisestuartLouisestuartalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank u everyone for your kind words. especially alicegee. after all thats why i put my last year into words, to see if it had happened to anyone else. i never thought for one second that something like this would happen to me and it did. im glad people have enjoyed hearing about it. makes it so worthwhile, and maybe makes the whole thing a bit less scary

MaonaighMaonaighalmost 2 years ago
Good luck

There must be a lot of lesbians and gay men who find themselves (often unknowingly) in the position you were in and this could not have been easy to write. I admire your courage in doing so and for that reason alone I'm giving you five stars. Perhaps in telling your story, you will have helped and given encouragement to others like you. If so, you can consider it worthwhile.

Now, I don't know if this is a one-off or if you intend to continue writing. If you do, try to find a good editor. Some people (usually those who haven't tried) think that writing is easy. It isn't. Like any craft you have to learn it and that takes a lot of work. An editor should be able to help you. Good luck, Louise.

LouisestuartLouisestuartalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you Maonaigh for your kind words, and yes thats the reason i did this, maybe to help people in same place as me, or even to help me understand whats happened the last year.

No i dont intend to write any more as im not a writer. This wasnt a story for me, it was me trying to put down in words my experience. so unless something similar happens, which i extremely doubt, then i wont be. im def in a happy place, and even happier with some of the kind words wrote about what happened to me.x

FandeborisFandeborisalmost 2 years ago

What a fantastic story. I believe in "Love at first sight", and I am sure Louise does too. Louise was probably a lesbian from the start. She fell for what society tells women what they "SHOULD" do and not what they NEED to do. In a way Louise is blessed, she found her significant other and turned her life around. I wish both of them happiness.

Writing a story such as this, is difficult. You are literally baring your soul to the public. It takes a lot of bravery to put what you have to paper. It should give hope to all read this and give them the start to realize life can be different and loving. You should be proud of your accomplishment. I, for one, will remember this.

I wish you well, a long and happy life with your partner, and a whole lotta love.

LemilyLemilyalmost 2 years ago

Wow. I was aroused from start to finish. Thankyou for sharing your first hand experience. I am sure I could be converted just as you were.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

omg, i was hooked from the first word to the last. you said that your looking to see if any other women had been through similar experieces, i havnt but omg i would love to and your story has only made my desire bigger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Stop using people. It's the inquisition anymore. Unless you live in oil rich countries - if you know what I mean. Otherwise it's wrong.

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I guess im just looking to see if any other women have went through anything similar to me.