All Comments on 'Alpha Male Makes Bet and Loses'

Grow up, mature, it sounds like the story of a prepubescent teenager.

And see a medical professional, you have an obvious dick size complex.

Yuk!

Keep dreaming shitty dreams!

Wife will leave sissy boy ASAP for real man!

I didn't know they allowed 13-year olds to enter this site, much less publish what they thought would be a story. I haven't read anything this juvenile in a very long time. But don't worry, odoreater will love it.

Names are capitalized even if they're not the first word in a sentence.

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How is making a bet that might require her to embarrass herself, "defending her honor?"

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H gets hard? CUCK!

Dont bother throwing your day job.

Like the previous comment said, this sounds like a teenager's jerk off fantasy. Come on. His friend Hector and all duct tape him to a hair so he won't go berserk? What do they think he might do once he gets free?

His wife of many years suddenly turns slut and makes him eat her creampie or 'won't fuck him again'. Again bullshit. Divorce or prison is where this is headed.

Andwhy make the man a huge monster? Have you seen most high school wrestlers. Strong ass bastards but generally not tall.

While not the worst story, it also wasn’t the best. The idea was good, the execution, not so much. But keep trying.

I laugh every time some fool say something stupid about a story like the moron below with his “wife will leave sissy boy ASAP for a real man” comment.

What will happen is whatever the author writes. Clearly he has no separation of what’s real and what’s fictional. (That means made up, dipshit)

FFS another cuck story - can you not warn us

Come on everybody it’s tongue and cheek if you can’t see it don’t read it

Idiots allowed to play with a word processor

I love eating her lover’s cum….as she shoves the dildo up my ass…

northsranderrhino is right...give a chimp a keyboard and it will bang out a cuckold story every time.

Nicely ironic, and you succeeded in winding up the fanatics. Work on readability and grammar to help the flow.

Don’t pay attention to haters below. Their wives are probably blowing their boss. Great story. Keep ‘em coming.

I don't know why this story isn't more highly rated. Nice. Please write more.

I don't get the hate. This story was super hot.

Don't get discouraged by the haters. Please keep writing.

part 2 with wife asking husband to suck his cock clean, then lick her pussy clean, husband while licking her clean gets his ass fuck at wifes request, saying you need to see how good this big cock feels first hand.

Ahahaha I usually don't like cheating wives stories but this guy kinda deserved it plus Jackie found and embraced her own sexuality <3