All Comments on 'Alpha Mommy's Beta Son'

Real out-in-space-submarine-driver stuff man!

Down the rabbit hole fetish of mine. I would love to have mommy switch on my lily white ass occasionally nick my nut sack, builds the level of baby makers squirming to get set free so much more..... how great it would be to squirt deep deep into my mommy's alpha cervix, alas to ultimately be aborted....... how heavenly it would be to keep on trying make little beta's to serve at their mother's altar!

Very different story. Whereas it’s an incest story but you could put into sci-fi. Can’t tell if there is to be another character?

""I can't deny that seeing the reflection of that arrogant oaf get his tail tanned isn't fun""

I think you'll find there are too many negatives in that sentence. It's always best to keep things simple when you write, even when writing dialogue.

Wow, pant, pant! What a hot story, thank you for writing and sharing it! More please!