by nycperv
This series has been incredibly well written and compelling. Its been a perfect balance of plot & character building, and gratifying moments along the way. The whole story may be long, but I dont think any of it has been unnecesarily dragged out. Keep up the amazing work, and kudos to your editors as well.
This series is exactly my shit; a huge blowjob focus, lots of brown-eyed girls, lots of cumplay. It's perfect. Don't listen to the people saying it's dragged out. Loving the short chapters, too.
I love the long drawn out story, every chapter full of fantastic blowjobs, beautiful women and suspense. I like that that you return to the details, described a bit differently each time. If our protagonist were to eat their pussies a few times more, I’d like that, too.
At last, some progress, and in the direction I like: morbid relationships. Thanks.