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angelicbeautyangelicbeautyover 10 years ago

Nice chapter. There are a few typos but very good. Can u make the chapters a little oonger

ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

There are errors that need fixing. Some parts are a bit confusing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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OMG you need an editor!!!! .....'Ruff hands'?......'.be genital'? ......rapping around her? Please get one this is embarrassing!!!!

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