by HeyAll
I wonder if that ever happened at any firm at which I worked. I found it perverse but very arousing. I can feel my erection as I write this. Five stars.
Why the hurry? More detail would have been nice. Well written and a fairly good story line though.
This should not be finished yet. The readers should have heard the detailed dialogue of shy and soft banter between mother/son. You HeyAll is good at that.
The most exciting part or the ending of this story supposed to be is when the mother is at the meeting attended by her son and Amira. All of the partners and colleagues attending admires her as she looked very sophisticated, elegant and respectable as she stands in front of them giving an impressive presentation. Only what the rest of the audience didn't know that this very respected lawyer they admired is not wearing panties under her elegant business suite skirt. Much worst is that there's still remnants of incest semen deep inside her womb.
Amira and Joan's son would looked at each other and smiled. They were able to whisper to each other saying "If they only knew."
Very hot. No matter what anyone says. But it could have been longer.
Maybe another chapter?
Amira should have licked out the cream pie! Five stars and a favorite point!
I hate when the son is portrayed as week. He needs to take control in part 2. Or have him come back in and force Amira to clean mom up.
I really enjoyed this story. I hope you have more of this story, perhaps the son can take control of the mother and have her obeying his every command.
Very well written.
While I enjoy your stories, a lot of them just end when it would be nice to see what happens next. Take this story as an example; it would be nice to know if the mother/son sex continues at home or is only a work thing when instigated by Amira. Does the son take a more active role, possibly as a dominant for the mother?
I like your stories, but they mostly leave me wanting more of the story and that feeling takes away from the enjoyment of the stories.
Things like this do happen,
I walked in on one of the office
girls at work, she was just clicking
away.When I asked who she said boyfriend,
gets them every day.
As always, well done.
..THANKS..
And you are just going to leave us hanging? If ever a story needed, NO, begged for a follow on this one does! Please!
I know you are the master of the 2 page quickie but I feel like it's the bottom of the 9th one man on, it's the wind up and the pitch, the ball is half way to the plate, Old Case is tense, bat cocked and the lights went out!
OMG! What a totally unique and arousing story. I loved the different levels of power and control throughout the story. I was curious to know if there was more to the relationship between Joan and Amira, and the ending gave just enough insight to leave the reader wanting more. Well done!
I agree with UAlbanyGirl and Rocky70–this story is perfectly paced with a unique blend of fantasy, real office humdrum and real office sex shenanigans. All we get from you is the best!
This story demonstrates that author HeyAll, after scores and scores of stories over the time, can still has creativity fire to write such a novel story that is so fresh, sexy, and extremely arousing. Story is well paced and loved the blending three side narration. Thank you very much for making our weekend as my wife joined to thank you. During these stressful time, you rekindled our imagination with a sensual plot. Much appreciated.
Be safe. Be well.
Great storyline. I was surprised by Amira's influence over Joan and was also hoping to see Anita have sex.
Another super story from HeyAll. I have read most of your work and it never disappoints. Keep your great work coming.
Loving your work - this is so hot.
The other woman, encouraging the heated sex. Great stuff.
Just about all of HeyAll's stories are hot!
Excellent
You write first class stories, and this is one of them. I’ve recently been involved in a discussion about the difference between seduction and sex, and this demonstrates the two ideas so well. I’m a big fan of your work, particularly the mother/son incest, so I’ll now go back and explore some more. Well worth at least five stars; thank you.
Wow, that was awesome. I'm not actually into incest, but this story has it all. Bravo how you let the emotions come across. A real refreshment!
HOT. like the game or exhibition the mature women normally play, but now changed some.
While I really liked your writing and the sex. I did not like Amira. But, that just might be me not liking controlling people. Good Job. Thank you.
Wow, I loved this story and how it slowly opened out. We want more. How about Amira and Joan are also taking the son to different parts of the company and getting more women involved too? Otherwise a really good start.
very intense and extremely sexy!! Love the way that Amira has control over her. Thank you
Damn! That was so perverse and great at the same time. Kudos! Write a sequel, please.
Short, and sweet...
Just needs a follow-up, to "close the case", as it were!!
Five**5**Stars!!💫💫💫💫💫💥🌋💯
Very hot story but sort of missing the beginning, where Amira took control of Joan, and it just ended without a real finish. Also, I was very surprised that Amira wasn't taking pictures and/or video while they were fucking. Pictures of the aftermath are fine but the real prize was during.