All Comments on 'Always Finish What You Start'

by FunwithRyleigh

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meg1meg1about 16 years ago
good story

Good story, loved the imagery. Keep going, you are talented.

Grayson_JamesGrayson_Jamesabout 16 years ago
Nicely done...

Quick paced and enjoyable. Don't know that it belongs in BDSM, but a good story.

TheJestersAdvocateTheJestersAdvocateabout 16 years ago
Beautiful

Love the story and it's one of the few erotic tales that I can read over and over and still get off too. Besides the great "naughty factor" to this story, it also has a plot and you get a sense the characters are real. Keep up the good work hun.

TheJestersAdvocateTheJestersAdvocateabout 16 years ago
Beautiful

Love the story and it's one of the few erotic tales that I can read over and over and still get off too. Besides the great "naughty factor" to this story, it also has a plot and you get a sense the characters are real. Keep up the good work hun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Love that kind of Woman

I love a woman who can take charge of her sexuality!

& love to play too!

too cool Funwith******kisses

kotorikotoriabout 16 years ago
Snarky

I've read all three 'Ryleigh' stories and really like the character. She's a little abrupt, but knows what she wants and obviously has the talents to get it. In the future, I'd like to see more of her day-to-day, non-sexual life...the classroom scene seemed very true-to-life, and her transformation from the embarrassment of getting caught day-dreaming to smei-dominatrix was dramatic.

LukkyKnightLukkyKnightalmost 16 years ago
That was hot...

Obviously I need to read everything you've written...

Wow.

mansomemansomealmost 16 years ago
The author is very talented.

I enjoyed this story... It was full of realism that I could totally relate to. I wanted to fuck Ryleigh too. She's a confident woman that's a match for any man. Would love to live the life of Ryleigh.......

naughtycakesnaughtycakesalmost 16 years ago
Very enjoyable

Not usually my cup of tea, but Ryleigh does a great job of putting you in the character's head and I got quite turned on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
wow

that was hot hot! J

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Phew!

wonderfully written and paced. Not sure about it being in BDSM though. Off to read more now....

William smythWilliam smythalmost 16 years ago
Top Rank

Like one ofd the other readers, I don't think of this fine story as BDSM. What it is to me is well written first rate pornography and I like it and admire the authors talent

lifethruphotoslifethruphotosover 15 years ago
Very well written!

Got me going quite well. I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
FUN!

VERY sexy - how come this never happens to me?! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good premise.

But not BDSM.

Sex happens too fast. Not enough foreplay before really getting into action.

Both characters are annoying.

Three stars.

swingset66swingset66about 2 years ago

Awesome story, Little sweets. Makes me wonder what happened during round two. :)

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