All Comments on 'Always in My Life Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Sweet chapter

This was a really sweet chapter. Just wish it was longer. It had just gotten interesting and it ended. We need another chapter soon please don't keep us waiting.

StarofAirdrieStarofAirdrieover 13 years ago
Maybe I am in the minority...

I loved this chapter. For the couple, and all the trauma that she has been through, this was a realistic experience. I know people read these stories for escape, but I like to see the complex characterizations, the humanity, the realism.

Nice job.

catman71catman71over 13 years ago
great so far

i love the story so far, but i am getting a sinking feeling that beth is hiding a trauma and that "kiddo" is acting like trigger to bring it back. please keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Just found this story and loved every minute of it. It was a short chapter but it was still great. The slow build between Spencer and Edie makes it all that much more sweeter. Can't wait to read more!

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