All Comments on 'Always Pay Your Fines'

dreadful. Write no more.

I don't know why this is in Exhibitionist and Voyeur - you're setting yourself up to get bad ratings because readers will be looking for a different story. This should be under Non-Consent.

The story itself needs editing and some work. The summary line implies the female character tries to get out of her fines, but this is just a bad cop forced sex story. You could have really gone somewhere with the story. If you rewrite it and decide which way you want to go with it then it would probably be received a lot better.