by 36DDLover
I have totally read this story already on this site. I hope it was you with a wet-write and you didn’t plagiarize it.
Great start to what I hope will be a long running story about Amanda's slutty adventures. Can't wait for more chapters.
Good story....but I was looking forward to Amanda's catch up with the film producer, Leanne and Eddie referred to in 'after the photo shoot'. Hopefully it's still on the cards in a future instalment.
This chapter is very well-written, and is very sweet and tender, with a wonderful romantic atmosphere. Unfortunately, it is in all its aspects too short, and could have been more fully developed.
This is a cut and paste of a penis reduction story from two or three years ago.
Amanda is the real deal!
She is a very likeable, hot and caring. I hope she will be caring and slutty in future events.
Really would like to meet her some day ;-)
This is your best story yet. It could be longer and more detailed, but you already indicated further encounters.
Hopefully Nate is only the beginning of several adventures with a lot of guys.
Jeff should not be a cuckold and he does not need to know about all of her sexual encounters.
Thank you! I can't wait for the next chapter(s)....
Amazing story! really well written and like the direction. When's the next part coming out?
So, every guy in this town has a foot long cock apparently, except for cucky boy, the gutter slut's husband.
There does seem to be a potential plagiarism issue with this story (of course, it's also possible that this author and the author of the previously-posted story are the same, or that the other author gave permission). But this does seem to be an issue that 36DDLover needs to address.
Too bad, as this is an otherwise enjoyable series.
I enjoyed this story - it shows promise. It would really be great if a second chapter to illustrate her taking Nate for a ride, if only to make him feel good about having a large penis.
Why do people have to critique these stories? Just read it, beat yer meat and move on.
Time to write round 2 and possibly more with Nate.
Maybe Amanda can visit Nate at his University and see if he fits in?
I enjoy your series but occasionally a follow up would make your stories. That would not leave the reader 'hangin'x.