All Comments on 'Amanda, CIA Agent Ch. 06'

Nicely done. Your present was well received and right on time. You were naughty to have me thinking the old vet was gonna get lucky. But so nice to reward with the ensuing dalliances and balance of the story. Thanks and Happy New year.

Despite the shipping backlogs you delivered on your promise irvingsmusings and I thank you. You were a bit naughty making readers think the wizened vet was gonna get lucky but quite nice with the ensuing action and overall balance of this Chapter. I enjoyed it so much this is my second attempt to comment on Ch. 06. First one was close but no cookie just like the veteran. Lol. Keep laughing and writing.

Amazing Story....Please continue this story

Amanda finally gets some payback after all this abuse! I have to say I didn't find this chapter as sexy as the others but I still appreciated your attention to details, making the terrorists truly barbaric, the way you described Amanda's team performing and behaving was perfectly believable and never broke suspension of disbelief. I also loved the little detail about how she felt the bullet as a tug on her skirt rather than a slash of pain. Excitedly continuing forward.... go Amanda! 5/5