All Comments on 'Amanda - Counsels Bobby and Josie'

Nice and hot, lots of anticipation, and good pace as things ramp up

Very well written. Looking forward to further adventures.

Good story telling, fun characters, keep it up! I would recommend an editor, there were a number of punctuation errors, spelling, etc. Teamwork! Thanks for the ride, Sugar. *Kiss*

The idea and the story are just brilliant!

I loved the development and Josie's transformation. Amanda was as usual - a really hot and man-loving MILF. I can't wait for your next story and would love to 'see' a real threesome with lots of sex. These three characters are pretty sexy.

I only have two minor points of criticism:

You could have used a proofreader, as SirKevin just mentioned.

Otherwise, the sex scene could be longer. It was a bit rushed, for example when Bobby thrusts his cock right into Amanda's pussy without a little bit of a build-up.

Thank you for your time! I am looking forward to more as usual.

OMG!!!!! That was so hot. I stopped 2 times to take care of myself. Thank you so much. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

This woman is hot!! Love the detail. Thank you, more please!