All Comments on 'Amanda Teasing Two Ch. 04'

Goodbye ,enough is enough?

I'm not the only one who's giving up on this story. The first installment was promising, but from there it's been a rapid downward spiral. THIS segment wasn't entertaining, erotic, exciting... It seems like you decided to write a degrading, hateful, confusing, non-arousing, non-incest/taboo story that alienates all readers.

I'd suggest starting over. Read your first part again and then ask yourself, "What would make this an erotic, arousing incest/taboo story next?" You took a wrong turn at the end of Part I, and you just kept going.