by readstories1989
Don't write your dialogue as if you're just too lazy to do it properly. It interrupts the flow of the story badly. Luckily, this story really wasn't worth saving anyway.
Is it hard writing in that closet? Im curious if mommy had a light installed to help you out or if you just use the illumination of the screen to type out this idiocy?
Asking for dozens of well balanced readers.