All Comments on 'Amazon Heat Ch. 04'

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spearman1spearman1about 15 years ago
Whoa!!

Whoa man what an unexpected twist! I think it's pretty cool that she has her own internal security team. I would really like for Jack to get to meet the other Others. Keep up the good work.

dupage10dupage10about 15 years ago
Very different slant!!

This story really has a great slant to it. One that is new to me and I've read many of the non-human stories on Literotica. Great work and the twist leaves you with many options to take in the direction of the story. Would make a great couple to put in a series of different stories. Looking forward to more. Congratulations on a great start and concept!!

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