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Click here"No, don't go yet," she whined. "Hold me a little while."
He lay on her bed and eagerly welcomed his naked little sister into his arms. She snuggled up to him. "I love you, Billy, but we shouldn't be fucking," she whispered.
He looked in her face. She grinned.
Dear dumbasses, you don’t need to comment on why you stopped reading a story. It just makes you look stupid. Also, don’t tell me “that’s not the way it’s supposed to go”. What a moron! It goes the way the writer wants it to go. Let’s see if you’re talented enough to write your own stories, freeloading bag of shit.
Was a great story until you got Billy involved with Amber don’t know how it finishes as I stopped reading it at that point 😞
I liked this series until you turned Billy into a rapist and made it sound like it he was just being a dom... That's NOT how it works, and should NEVER work.
Shame too, cause it was really good until that point...
You are a very talented writer. You make me wonder how much is fantasy and how much is experience. :-)
BTW: I was one who questioned if these stories were rewrites. I was not being critical ... just curious. I have several that need amending but my effort to resubmit was denied. Probably because the previous edition had to be deleted first????