by nycperv
Fantastic story. The reader is left wondering, "Which girl did I like best?". A follow-up story might help resolve this burning question.
Interesting premise.
Good story.
But too sudden. Too automatic.
And two pussies, but nothing happens to/with them?
He could have played with/eaten one while the other girl was blowing him. Not even a thought of that?
Four stars.
I loved this. Its perfect, notes!
Causal sex / free use narratives like this are extremely rare on here, so I wish you had kept it in the larger story world and would tell more tales in that world.
Great great story. A simple, fast blowjob story, always my favourite kind.
Good story. I also like how it's purely blowjob/titjob and no penetration. Give stars. :-)