All Comments on 'Amber, The One with the Tits'

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ipreferoralipreferoralabout 2 years ago

Fantastic story. The reader is left wondering, "Which girl did I like best?". A follow-up story might help resolve this burning question.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Interesting premise.

Good story.

But too sudden. Too automatic.

And two pussies, but nothing happens to/with them?

He could have played with/eaten one while the other girl was blowing him. Not even a thought of that?

Four stars.

TheDrowTheDrowabout 2 years ago

I loved this. Its perfect, notes!

Causal sex / free use narratives like this are extremely rare on here, so I wish you had kept it in the larger story world and would tell more tales in that world.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great great story. A simple, fast blowjob story, always my favourite kind.

Budda002Budda002almost 2 years ago

Good story. I also like how it's purely blowjob/titjob and no penetration. Give stars. :-)

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