by mistyrydher
I had to ding you, though, because I had to reread part of it to figure out what was going on. You left the italics turned on, and I thought we were still in the story-within-a-story.
I don't know what the other persons was commenting about unless you have corrected it, I understood every word of it and thought it was very good and "hot". Anyway keep it up and thanks.
Great story. I love how you take time for her to actually seduce him. And the use of the writing assignment was ingenious, I especially liked the "tree story", a clever way to use a cliched assignment.
I liked it -- very creative and true to life. I hope this really happened!
I liked it -- very creative and true to life. I hope this really happened!
I really loved it and look forward to reading you other stories if they are anyhting like this one!!
Very hot story! And look.. it's gdavis! One of my favorite writers on this site! Squeee!
I enjoyed it, I felt you spent more time on the seduction and the past than you did on the actual event. Maybe you ran out of steam? Anyway, clearly you like a little age play and spanking. Couple that with Hot fucking and you will write something even more amazing! Great job!
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Being a teacher I know how difficult it can get at times, and this sort of fantasy never really works in real but is a great to bust the stress! ;-)