- NonConsent/Reluctance
- Amber's Rush Hour Train Ride Pt. 01
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It was just after 5:10pm on a Friday evening and Amber was waiting on the platform for her subway home after a very long day. As usual for this time of night it was packed and when the train finally arrived Amber pushed her way on and towards the back to avoid the crush of people.
Holding onto a pole so she didn't fall over she felt some of the tension of her stressful day leave her as she thought about the bubble bath she was going to sink into when she finally arrived home.
As the train sped away from the station she was jolted out of her thoughts as she stumbled backwards into the person behind her. I mumbled an apology and quickly moved to put some space between them. She was pulling away when she felt a hand rub over her mini skirt covered ass. Gasping she pulled away sharply only to have an arm wrap around her middle underneath her coat. "Stop moving or I'm going to have to start using this" a voice growled from behind her as she felt something cold and hard through her thin blouse. Looking down Amber froze when she saw the hand holding a knife just under her breast hidden from others view by her coat.
"Just relax," the voice said as she felt him rub himself against her ass. She could feel his rock hard erection through the material.
Putting a little distance between their bodies, the man behind her slid his hand down her ass before reaching under her skirt and running his finger over her covered pussy. She clenched her legs against the touch and felt as he dug the knife harder into her skin.
"Open your legs bitch,"
She opened her shaking legs wider for him gasping as she felt the tip of the knife threatening to pierce her skin.
He worked his fingers into her underwear and thrust two fingers deep inside her pussy. He started to pump in and out quickly as he leaned forward and licked at her ear.
"Mmm, does that feel good bitch," he whispered into her ear as she whimpered from the painful intrusion in her bone dry pussy.
"Please stop, it hurts," she begged quietly whilst looking round for anyone that could help.
" No one is going to save you bitch, you will take what I give you and thank me for it or I'm going to start poking holes into your pretty little body," the man growled as he added a third finger inside her.
"T....thank you sir," Amber stutters put as she feels the fullness in her tight pussy
The man moans in satisfaction as he licks down her neck and slows his fingers down a little.
Amber feels moisture starting to gather in her pussy and relaxes into his touch a little now the pain is easing.
The man thrust his hard cock against her ass whilst working his fingers in and out of her pussy. He uses the knife to caress her tits and licks and sucks on her neck. Amber can feel her orgasm building from his attention and looks down horrified that she is enjoying being touched by a stranger on a packed train. She bites down on her tongue to muffle her sounds as she feels her orgasm building deep in her stomach.
"I want to hear you slut, I want everyone on this train to hear you cum from a stranger touching you. Do you hear me bitch," he says harshly as he digs the knife in a little harder and she feels a sting as it digs into her tender flesh.
Scared of what he will do with the knife and feeling her orgasm coming quickly she releases a loud breathy moan and throws her head back as she cums all over his fingers. She can feel the people around her looking on as she feels her cum dripping down her thighs. She moans and pants more as he thrusts his fingers faster drawing out her orgasm.
"Dirty little whore, getting finger fucked on a packed trained by a stranger. You loved it didn't you bitch. You would let me bend you over and fuck you right now with everyone looking you filthy little cum slut," he teases into her ear as he pulls his fingers out and wipes them on her thigh. He quickly pulls back from her and she stumbled before looking around and noticing they are just arriving at her station.
She ducks her head and quickly starts moving towards the doors on shaking legs but not before hearing his teasing voice behind her
"Be seeing you soon slut."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoGiven that this is your first story then congrats for being brave. It’s a sound piece of writing and is a variant of a very popular fantasy. However, due to the obvious threat of violence it’s a non erotic story for me. Rape and sexual assault are not sexy, fun or erotic, it’s fucking terrifying and nausea inducing. Having an orgasm during SA/ rape is a complete mind fuck. Never mind that it’s an essentially a healthy response to physical stimulus. Society (western) has a fucked up notion that women aren’t supposed to enjoy sex, those that do are supposedly “sluts”. My response is “Fuck No”. There’s nothing logical or right about men being praised for fucking anyone and everyone but if a woman does the same she’s a filthy slut? Nope.
If this was presented as a CNC scenario instead then yes that would be very very erotic. “Rape Fantasy” is the safe way to enjoy wild sex outside of what’s considered acceptable/ normal.
That said if for any reason you want to write fiction based on what would be deemed actual rape/ SA then go for it. It’s your story you should write whatever you want. Apologies if all of that seems a bit “preachy” I’m just trying to point out the very real differences.
Best of luck with your writing.
Tess (uk)
Anonymous4 months agoI've seen numerous practically identical stories on Literotica and would normally mark it low for that reason. However as it's your first story you get some leeway, so I'll leave it to others to give a rating.
