by dimmy05
To be honest, chapter 2 floundered a bit but you totally redeemed yourself in this chapter. This is how I feel a situation like this would work itself out and the story from Christine was a real gut twister but then most of the honest family rejection stories are exactly that. I can understand Christine not being able to help her brother due to her age and situation but that flashback mentioned nothing about the mother and that must mean that she was just as big a piece of crap as the father was. I cannot wait to see your next chapter.
I like how the characters are all developing. I am enjoying this series.