All Comments on 'American Pickers: Peggy 01'

Mixed feelings. Writing is good, expecting a slow build up to nc scenes I read on. Erotic appeal was not my dominant feeling while reading. Though there is not something obvious (at least to me) to complain about I felt a void. Maybe its due to the rather dry style that reminds me more of the crime or thriller genres. Good erotic fantasy stories, even the dark 'forbidden pleasures' kinds, should have a more erotic and sensual feel to please me. Even if they are not lovey dovey ones.

So maybe erotic nc fantasy components are more prevalent in future chapters. Stay tuned