by knightfantasies
I gave it a five because I liked it very much overall. Constructive Unsolicited Advice: The author could have developed the final action scene "The next several hours are spent breaking in Madi" instead of skipping to the climax of mother/daughter.
Would love more from this series.
Thought this chapter was good, personally feel that the Madis passing to the other three could have been made longer. It felt a little rushed.
I know that rape is a heinous crime I find it digusting by the way, but you got to wonder if Rape is so heinous than why do we see it as a sick fetish either being the one that os doing the Raping or the one that is being rape? Makes you wonder, maybe all of us that is into this kind of fetish should all go to hell when we die.
Just some thoughts for you for all of us to think about.......