All Comments on 'Amnesia'

by Yshomatsu

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow, fantastic story! Couldn't stop reading once I started.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I never write comments on this site, but this story is truly amazing. Not just as a sex story, as a fiction story it is excellent as well. I absolutely love female villains toying with their male prisoners… it’s the best. Your descriptions of the haze in Anubys’ mind were outstanding, it was like I could see for myself all the effects you wrote about.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really captivated me and kept me reading! A unique twist on supernatural romance/erotica. Great epilogue! I can’t wait to see where the story goes. Keep writing please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fantastic. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

As far as side stories go, this is one of my favorites. Marvelously done

warelliswarellisalmost 2 years ago

This was hot! I really like how Anubys slowly broke down from the changes of the milk, and Nyx, were causing to him~.

And it was really hot how Nyx finally revealed her true succubus form~.

Is this part of the world some sort of modern or magitech setting? Because it seems a lot more...superheroic/21st century compared to the areas Viridis & Meridiana were operating in (which seemed more medieval fantasy).

As for this Serkrax Nyx mentioned, have we seen her appear in other stories?

YshomatsuYshomatsualmost 2 years agoAuthor

This story was my attempt to make a random short 4-5 page story for my patrons. I wanted to do what some other authors have done with just quick, easy to write shorts for constant content. I failed because I kept thinking of how the cliff hanger could expand. With the finished whole story there are elements that don't fit into the world I've been creating so not sure if this story can be cannon. BUT I also thought since I've made my succubi come from another dimension it kind of made sense if some of them would know more advanced technology so I added in other things to make it loosely connect to the main world just in case I want to do anything with the ranch in the future. For now it's just a nice side story to enjoy

warelliswarellisalmost 2 years ago

Yeah, it's really good. I do hope we can see Serkrax herself at some point in a story, perhaps seducing some normal perskn into her clutches~

3VIlM1K33VIlM1K3almost 2 years ago

This story is great, I love the futility of the hero as he tries to resist his inevitable demise. Keep it up, I've been working on some stories myself that I hope to put up soon!

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Always looking for feedback, of any kind. Please feel free to email me, @Yshomatsu on Twitter for the rare update =P 3/24/19 I've gone and done it. Started my own Patreon page! If you enjoy my writing and would like to support me you now can. If you can't afford, no worries...