All Comments on 'Among the Vay Pt. 02'

I want Abby to be like... His main girl? Head concubine? HBIC? I want it badly

That wasn’t where I was going but she definitely has an important role in my head. I have an epilogue written where Abby is the main focus.

Also it means a lot to me you care enough about the characters to have preferences!

I was worried when I started on the first part but, gentlemanly and caring orcs is just something awesome. I mean the implied coercion is still more than a bit iffy to consider but this is written in a very sweet manner and I'd like it to continue, please.

I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I am trying to go for ambiguity in terms of how much coercion is happening. I know it can be a little uncomfortable but I find it interesting to write. Its a tough line to walk though and I hope I can keep the balance right. I'll be interested to see what you think of the next part, which should be dropping soon.

I agree with hazelcurves. Abby is sweet, and I love the chemistry between her and Glen. Ahhhh, I just love reading about meek reserved girls discovering their sexuality, especially when they are gangly and lithe of frame like meee!