All Comments on 'Amor Fabula Ep. 07'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 5 years ago
Not a feel good story. But a well written one.

I liked the two main character arcs more then the dystopian plot . But it was all well done for that genre. Supporting characters need polish in terms of polishing the rough diamond. In terms of completeness, I would have enjoyed face off confrontation where mother and son actually verbally acknowledge the shift in their relationship . But the silent assent in tandem with stealthily reaching out for physical love by Anne was authentic as well.

Full marks *****

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Corvus Turrim is an author of adults-only erotica in a variety of genres, including taboo themes such as inter-family relationships, cheating wives, and in the broader scopes of fantasy, science fiction and a little in the way of horror. Corvus has independently published a go...

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