All Comments on 'Amor Prohibetur Ch. 20'

This was about four 40-ish adults getting it on ad nauseum. Life in Mexico observations or mo' money mo' problems subplots took a breather to detriment of readability. Maybe next time CorvusTurim777 will find a theme or characters that can sustain both his and readers' interest. The quirky talent of author is there , the stamina is open to question.?

I wouldn't have chased down the 77 other chapters of this mess, even if it had been interesting.