All Comments on 'Amorous Agents'

Unbelievable plot with awful sentence construction and writing.

This is barely readable. Compared to your other stories if they are even, this is sad. It reminds of your earlier stories, so this is you.

Who is your writer?

I enjoyed the story. Please add more.

I like this so far. Apparently everyone who posts here is suppose to be perfect because if you make any mistakes the wolves attack anonymously. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Remember haters take the time out of their schedule to read your story

For those who are so critical... let's see what you can write? Can you do better? Are you also prepared to bear the brunt of severe critique??

Love to see how you handle the same response to anything you dare to write! :)

The story reads perfectly well, it's as the author wishes and is not meant to be the same as previous works; it's not in the paranormal genre. :)

Get over it and show us what you can produce instead, if you can. :)