All Comments on 'Amorous Goods: Vikki's Turn Ch. 04'

Good grief. The fact that this was the best you could offer should embarrass you.

You suck. I don’t know what English teacher you had; but they did a shitty job.

A pretty good story. I’m looking forward to future chapters! Be careful to grammar check & spell check.

Wildflower2176, Have you noticed how the biggest complainers are always Anonymous? They need to volunteer as a proof reader/editor and help those they think use bad English ! I, for one, am fascinated with your story. But then I tend to look at the flow of the tale rather than any grammatical error.

yeah, I have noticed that Anons are the biggest complainers. I write for my own twisted pleasure. If they don't have the courage to leave their "name" then I'll ignore them!