All Comments on 'Amufa the Treacherous Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
GOOD START

LIKE TO SEE MORE

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348over 5 years ago
Good start

Nice but it seemed a little barren. Maybe more descriptions of their surroundings, her appearance etc. just fill it out a little more. I’ll be following:)

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