by ShadowLuver
Loved the over-the-top bodice ripping beginning, her romance novel dream. Well written story, great imagination!
Delightful and sexy, with unexpected twists and directions. Your imagination is vivid and your writing is excellent, smoothly blending Holiday magic, eroticism, emotions, and characters. Great job here!
Short, sweet, sexy, and excellent writing. Could have listed as "erotic coupling," though I see that fantasy is a predominant element. Great story, perfect little holiday yarn, good job!
Two thumbs WAY up! Appreciate the examination of emotions, arousal and magic moments; hot sex and a little touching.
Love it! Imaginative, well-written, sexy and kind of sweet. Great Xmas tale.