All Comments on 'Amy's Christmas Guest Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
minor fix needed

A minor fix that will greatly make reading easier and lessen any possible confusion is stop using the construct of "word - word" for a pause of whatever. Beyond that the story is fairly good.

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