All Comments on 'Amy's Ex Comes to Town Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Garbage

Why doesn’t anyone learn about this garbage that just because you write it like it’s a cheating scenario but what you don’t get is it all boils down to the lower than scum word cuckold no matter how you write it this is a vile story which when you write it in this section gets you moaned at when you think of what a cuckold it is a voyeur a lower form of scum that will destroy anything so it can get its thrills even a fantastic marriage doesn’t stand a chance that’s why you will get slammed about this vile crap should have put it in erotic section or voyeur just because you think it’s a loving wife section it isn’t just because you try to put it as cheating wife it’s still garbage this section is more of hero and villains section aka cheaters never win these are proud people that read this section and at the moment you are baiting them to burn you are you trying to get a kick out of this as I said if you want to keep writing carry on but little tip stay away from the loving wife section unless you want to write how a cheating person got caught then either got divorced or was killed or was sent to jail and the hurt person ends up a hero and sails off into the sunset do you get the drift that’s why when you write stuff like you have written you get a few people that think that was amazing then end up with about 20 to 40 people that thought liked it and you end up with 100 or more that hate it as I keep saying this section is a very very tough section just because it says cheating on it or swinging on it think of what your story boils down to just because you thought it was cheating it wasn’t it was down to voyeur aka cuckold

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lets jus hope good ol'

Nate's arrival is delayed by 25 years, but he sends his georgeous wife to help out the slut's husband every weekend for that entire period of time. And with her husband using a surrogate wife on weekends, she will have a lot of time to clean his house and pre prepare his weekly meals. Does not look like there will be much time to go find folks to screw around with. Nice finish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

can't stand to read this shit just a bunch of stupid drivel not sure why anybody will read it it is stupid

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Gave it a 1, because 0 wasn't an option

nothing more to say

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Willing cuck

Instant *

Hope they never have kids, gene pool's contaminated enough as it is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story

Please write the next part soon as I loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ah....I see...

...that our resident jerkoff (26thnc) has started his anonymous negative bs campaign against another story. It's really sad that he spends so much time posting all these negative comments, when everyone who comes to this category does so to read stories about wives getting fucked by other men. It's a shame that he lost his wife to another man and now spends every waking hour on here like he's on a mission. But damn, you would think with someone so old that you would want to spend your last few years on earth out getting laid, not holed up in some run down shack posting his drivel.

Any way, this was a hot as hell story. It's always great to see the interaction between a loving couple who share their kinks and fantasies. It was a fun read and I hope there is more in the future.

Cnj4funtimesCnj4funtimesover 4 years ago
Nice job. Will hope to see Part 3

Great story, well written and hot. Don’t listen to these negative anonymous assholes on here that shoot it down, they just don’t get it.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Hi annony cuck bastard

Glad you caught my comment before this.pussy author deleted it. Story.I common cuck and whore drivel, with.no loving wife to be found.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
"I felt do dirty"

I wish "I felt do dirty" was the only mistake I saw, but between chapter 2 and the first installment, there were dozens of spelling and punctuation errors. These mistakes make it difficult to concentrate on just how hot this story is, and it is indeed erotic. Please find an editor!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Load

Load of crap.

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11about 4 years ago
Please keep going into Chap 3

a) It is a good story. You do need an editor to help you. Contact me.

b) You own the story. You own the comments page. Please delete all the crap from the Loving Wives Police Force.

c) Do NOT abandon the category just because there are 100 or so twisted nuts who want you to. Post more "cuck shit" and drive them nuts. Then delete their comments. As Division Commander 26thNC demonstrates, some of them are so fucking nuts that they will comment on the comments.

Wilson SpaldingWilson Spaldingalmost 4 years ago

Definitely risky...

Definitely hot.

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