by real_life_swingers78
The concept is a good one but too many pages of build-up. The descriptions are too clinical and lack erotic adjectives and adverbs.
I gave up about half-way through; maybe I missed the best part but I guess that's my fault.
Forget the person who said that the story was too detailed.
Not everybody just wants a 30 second jerkoff. Good erotic
story that seemed a lot like parties that I have attended.
Thanks
What a great party. It reminds me on several I have been to and the memories are great. We love lifestyle stories that are just fun and good sex. The detail adds to the whole thing.