All Comments on 'Amy's House Warming Orgy'

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NakedinNCNakedinNCover 15 years ago
Too much build-up and detailed descriptions

The concept is a good one but too many pages of build-up. The descriptions are too clinical and lack erotic adjectives and adverbs.

I gave up about half-way through; maybe I missed the best part but I guess that's my fault.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good well developed story.

Forget the person who said that the story was too detailed.

Not everybody just wants a 30 second jerkoff. Good erotic

story that seemed a lot like parties that I have attended.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great Party

What a great party. It reminds me on several I have been to and the memories are great. We love lifestyle stories that are just fun and good sex. The detail adds to the whole thing.

timm10827timm10827almost 8 years ago

Excellent story. I would want a house party to be the same way.

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