by real_life_swingers78
What a great party. It reminds me on several I have been to and the memories are great. We love lifestyle stories that are just fun and good sex. The detail adds to the whole thing.
Forget the person who said that the story was too detailed.
Not everybody just wants a 30 second jerkoff. Good erotic
story that seemed a lot like parties that I have attended.
Thanks
The concept is a good one but too many pages of build-up. The descriptions are too clinical and lack erotic adjectives and adverbs.
I gave up about half-way through; maybe I missed the best part but I guess that's my fault.