All Comments on 'Amy's House Warming Orgy'

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timm10827timm10827almost 8 years ago

Excellent story. I would want a house party to be the same way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great Party

What a great party. It reminds me on several I have been to and the memories are great. We love lifestyle stories that are just fun and good sex. The detail adds to the whole thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good well developed story.

Forget the person who said that the story was too detailed.

Not everybody just wants a 30 second jerkoff. Good erotic

story that seemed a lot like parties that I have attended.

Thanks

NakedinNCNakedinNCover 15 years ago
Too much build-up and detailed descriptions

The concept is a good one but too many pages of build-up. The descriptions are too clinical and lack erotic adjectives and adverbs.

I gave up about half-way through; maybe I missed the best part but I guess that's my fault.

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