by BareAmy83
I just found your writing a couple days ago and was planning to score this story and comment after it ends. Now that I'm caught up with the latest chapter, I had to tell you that you have created a compelling story - I can't wait to read more, and anything else that you may choose to write.
I can almost foresee an Amy/ Celeste coupling on the horizon!
Really enjoy the story, As I read it was so easy to picture it all in my mind. So looking forward for the next chapter.
very easy to picture this happening and so relaxed not forced. Enjoyable read.
More ….more….more! Great storytelling, Amy. Must say, I love the Audrey Hepburn glasses!
Thank you. Great discovery of Amy's beginnings with nudism. I certainly wnat to read more
Another freaken sexy Ch. Can't wait to read the next and next and next after that.
I am reminded of the musical movie classic, "The King and I," starring Yup Brynner. In large part, it was a story about forbidden love, though not the same type as this story. In this story, every time I read a sentence start with "Daddy and I," I can sense every emotion behind those words.
I compliment you on this simile:
"...'puff up' a little bit, like a bird trying to make himself as big as possible."
Spot on, girl, and so very perceptive of the similarities between males in different species. Well done!