by Cristal_di_Canta
As a straight man of 74 years old, I really identify with these characters. I loved the intense total love in your story. Thank you. Hein
Thank you for that feedback and I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. The true joy of love is that it can be found anywhere, and from anyone, once our eyes are opened and we are brave enough to be honest with our feelings.
You have not the slightest clue how a man thinks, so you write a man as a woman thinks a man thinks. Pretty much, metaphorically speaking,you think a man basically laying flat on the ground at the woman's feet in adoration, immediately putting his testicles in her purse is a good example of a man in love.
This is clearly some kind of fantasy wish fulfilment.
I'd much,much rather have lesbians,which I don't know if you are one, hate us men than expect us to be and like us for being whatever servile, low self esteem, female worshipping spineless male feminists you fantasize men to be.
Thank you for a lovely story of loss and abuse but finally finding love 😍 🤗 ♥