All Comments on 'An Accepting Wife Pt. 01'

Yeah. Logic.

Interracial sex in LW.

Fetish in LW.

Shit in LW.

Make LW a story trash can. It's OK. Successful.

Interracial sex doesn't offend me - the way it's generally written does.

Current score for this piece of trash has to be fake! Worth -10 stars (which doesn't exist).

WHAT WERE YOU SMOKING WHEN YOU WROTE THIS?

Well…a female cuck 🤗. Of course.

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I'm wondering why you thought this was an improved version of the first dreadful submission. 2*

Ah yes, skank slut with a bbc story but from the perspective of the bbc's wife.

In the end nothing different, skank still bad-mouths her husband and wants more sex.

The most probable cause of the skank's husband's poor performance is because she lays there like a dead fish. Probably not her first time cheating either.

Fag Cuck Shit. Like the gender matters. Grow up.

Good cuckquean story

Interesting story!

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NOT!!!!!!!!!

Wow. So brave commenting anonymously. If you don't like it, okay, fine. But why all the hate?

Great story, can't wait for the next part...

Correction of one word didn’t improve you Jamal story at all.

Cuckold trash. 2 stars.

Jamal story? Talk about racist? Why is it that some people can't get beyond the black and white thing, or is it that he is described as having a larger than average penis? Is it jealousy at your own small package? I don't get it. In all honesty, I rarely use the large cock paradigm (mostly false) but this is just a story.

Not your cup of tea. Another brave anonymous commentator. Do me a favor. Don't just trash, tell me what you prefer. Or help me by making suggestions. But, at any rate, I will keep tyring.

I could have used a little more plot, but then, generally my stories draw complaints of not enough sex, so it’s a question of taste! I did enjoy the set up, and you certainly can keep a sex scene going! I also found your characters very believable, and if there is a sequel, I’d love to know their post encounter feelings. Since your story was set up well, and then full of the three encounters, there is room for extension of the ending.

Thanks for writing! Ignore the anons, like a check, it’s worthless unless signed!

Not my cup of tea. This is nothing but a cuckold story and you should tag it as such. Sex scenes were well written, but the cuckold theme still wrecked it for me. Hope you try again with a different theme.

I thought this was a very sexy story with believable characters. I can't imagine why people who are obviously so uptight about Loving Wives type scenarios seem compelled to read them and then trash the authors for penning something that so offends them. Personally I loved this story and would love to read a few more sexy sequels! Very hot!

I never think of the word cuckold, guess I will start marking this kind of story as such.

What's not to like ? Well done .

I think a wife pimping out her husband is kind of hot, and the sex was pure lust. Good descriptions but I think I would have enjoyed it more if the wife had been more involved.

Will527 read part 2. :D

Reminds me of an evening after accidentally meeting married high school class mates few years after graduation at a restaurant and dining together. I was married living in chicago visiting my father in Wisconsin. My friends invited me over fot a night cap. In school i always wanted to screw her. Actually one night while he was out we layed together and made out but that was all. Tey lived upstairs from me in a duplex. After taking my drink he sat in a chair and she approached giving me a passionate kiss and started undressing. She hugged me whispering, it OK Jim likes to watch. I looked over at Jim he had his cock out stroking. There was a lounge chair positioned three or four feet in front of his cross ways giving him a good view of the action. She lay back in the chair legs spread ass at the edge working her pussy. I stripped my clothes off got on my knees teased her wet pussy hole with my head then proceeded fucking slowly. Jim began jerking off faster started half shouting jerking like a banshee "fuck her faster, fuck her harder." She was just as vocal and active. This was first of many when I visited over a five year period. They moved to Texas. We met each five years at HS reunions. Forty years later sent my grand daughter to Baylor. With viagra on board we took up where we left off.

Very hot Will527. I don't get into my personal experiences, because I have had a bit of a wild life. I don't think many would believe the things I have done. At any rate I write just for fun, some based on my own experiences, some from people I know, some just come to mind and I decide to write about them.

Oh I so liked that so full of descriptions, needs proff reading as you said a bit in edited but good

I loved it!, It was a different story line and very well written.

Very hot story - loved it!! I was hoping when Diane asked Michelle to get her ready for round 3 (when she had to be wet from so much cum) I assumed she wanted Michelle to use her mouth - what a tease! But I hope that is set up for things to come. Thanks

That's hot!

I have since started using Grammarly. Hopefully it will catch most of my editing errors.