All Comments on 'An Adventure'

ONE WORD. MORE.

Such a beautiful play of the heart. The beginning was a little hard to relate to cause for a moment I thought she was Amish, but the rest of the story was absolutely wonderful.

Well written as always and erotic as well. Nicely done CS.

This one flowed nicely and the ending was not vague or mysterious. I love happy endings...

A slow build to seriously high energy finish -

Great job and clearly well thought out -

The father is a wise man and has the strength to let olife flow good for him -

I agree with all of the previous comments that are still here. This is a story I wish I could have had in my own life...either side of the coin.

This picking a category business is rough! Winner.

A really good Erotic Coupling tale.

Wasn’t IN LW!,,