All Comments on 'An All-Slut "Fear Factor"'

You have an amazing imagination. I found this to be a very fun read.

Really good job, but I really wanted a good,sexy catfight between the girls.

I notice that you have no "H" after any of your stories. I believe that is because you stop them just when they might get really interesting an sexy. Take this one for instance. It really should have continued to the hotel room for at least a little bit. You aren't very descriptive, but if you at least got to the place where she has all of her holes filled at the same time it might have earned you that "H".

I am an editor here so if you want some help, let me know.