All Comments on 'An Anniversary Threesome'

Could use some proofreading. Who is Laura? Is she a third girl in the story? Or was this an older story that was rewritten and you missed some name changes?

I liked the story but the name changes to Laura take away from it a bit.

Why the fleeting presence of Laura? She appears three times, I think.

Have submitted an edit, should be fixed in a couple of days. Older version mistakenly uploaded, my bad.

I can’t really imagine a girl, or even a guy, wanting to be on the bottom of a 69 while the girl on top as getting fucked in the ass. That sounds like it could have a somewhat nasty result.

Other than that, a hot story, though the bad editing, switching Julie and Laura back and forth made for a kind of jarring story.

I’m just wondering where all of the 1* fag cuck shit comments are.

Good lord, so much included in such a short space of time.

The sex was very well described, even though a little short, but it is most men’s dream to have his g/f introduce another girl into the mix. However I was a little put off and confused when Laura appeared - who was she??!!

i liked it but who is Laura?

Where did Laura come from? Alex, Julia, Elena & Laura ????

As I've already explained-- mistake on my part with the names, have resubmitted with correction. Should be sorted soon!! Not the worst thing that's happened.

I assumed Laura was Julia's fake hookup name. Alex & Julia never used their real names in front of Elena, once Alex called her Laura & the other times he used babe or some other generic endearment.

Laura's ghost was present too? 1*

My wife is bisexual and from time to time we will go out and pick up a hot girl to bring home. They say that couples who have common interests stay together longer.

Great story love the development of Alex and Julia. Keep them coming. Pun not intended.

Another great story. Keep them coming love seeing the build up of Julias and Alex’s characters. Also, I like the description of Alex.