All Comments on 'An Arrangement between Coworkers'

Good premise.

But barely a beginning. Presumably there'll be more. And if it is, it needs to be longer.

Four stars for the beginning.

Average, so far; this scene needs to be developed

and I hope there's more to come. If so, this should have been labeled part/chapter 1.

More is coming! I have chapter two already queued to publish :)

Well written! Clean, simple, and easy to read. Looking forward to a second chapter:)

Good story, hope the findom continues!

I really liked the way this started. There’s plenty of potential for a great series. I personally hope there isn’t too much findom, and that it becomes physical (without being too brutal). Happy writing

Really good start. I like reading from the female perspective, excited for future chapters.

Thank you

I loved this, basic premise we can all get behind, normalising findom so it isn't a teenage girls demanding huge life altering tributes, although I do hope Claire insidiously works her way into his life and controls more.

Whatever you decide to right I am sure I will love it. Also please ignore the anonymous brigade; you write and format your stories as you wish.

5*

Good premise.

Too short. Barely a beginning.

Four stars for potential.

This has great potential. There are a few spots where "he/his /her" are mixed up so it distracted me from the story(not a huge deal. ) It just disrupts the flow when I read 'just seeing him holding the coffee he bought me'

Great premise, will be waiting to see what happens next.

Nice start to a series.

Very nice start…flirty and fun with some nice foreshadowing.