All Comments on 'An Authorized Affair'

Has some nice elements to it, but desperately needs to be edited for spelling, grammer, and plot.

Ironic that the writing critic misspelled grammar. Maybe he ought to shuddup.

have the women fulfilling their fantasy with no discussion about the husband getting to do his. In this one, she outright rejects it. She does not offer him a REAL chance to enjoy a woman and have her watch. The fact is he is too stupid to realize she is using him to get what she wants and really does not love him or love him enough to give him what he might want. Divorce the selfish bitch.