All Comments on 'An Awakening'

Lovely story

Thank you. It is my first effort. Hopefully, more to follow. Constructive criticism welcome.

Thus far I like the first story the best. But you do have a nice intensity in all of the stories. I do not understand the gadgets, but I like the way they are together as a couple.

Thank you. In the future, I’ll work on clarifying the setting and scene in an attempt to eliminate confusion.

There’s just so much to say but damn I think “Yes please!”, should sum it all up. So far it’s breathtakingly hot!

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

Glad you enjoyed it, Tess. I’ll try not to let you down in future stories.

Well done! I can feel the intensity and need building within your character as you drove her to the edge.

Very nice 😘

Happy to be of service any time.

I think I may have read your stories back to front. I loved this one the most. Not only the obvious and intense hotness but how your character seemed a bit more poetic. Thanks for writing and I hope to read more from you.