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All Comments on 'An Erotic Fairytale'

by BrazenVixen

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mBrowmBrowalmost 17 years ago
Looks promising ...

The story appears quite lusty, though maybe a bit fast-paced perhaps. It looked good technically, too, in my quick read. Keep us on edge, and keep writing!

phoenix_ray86phoenix_ray86almost 17 years ago
so far so good

I agree it was kind of fast. it is a good start though. keep going!

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