All Comments on 'An Erotic Summer Family Vacation'

This is one of the worst stories I've ever read. Ummmmm...where was the incest exactly.

As an "Incest" entry it's lousy.

As something else, let others decide.

I think this story is fantastic! its not 100% incest even though there is a little bit of taboo. Still a fantastic story! Certainly got me wet! :)

It's still a damn fine story. What more do you want?

I wondered about the incest part and there was a little bit of a chance for that. If I had a chance to do what the story describes; I'd do it in a heartbeat and not worry about the classification! Of course; there could be an addition to this sometime to work more incest in if the author is so inclined! LOL

Who cares. It is a hot story that needs a few more chapters. Soon!

There is no incest here! Get it right dufus!

Good storyline except Mark and Marcy should have been boffing each other's brains out, perhaps after catching Julie, Sam and Nancy doing it!

"Tags" are not the same as category's,

This doesn't belong here.

I sent a message to Laurel asking why she put this in Incest. I guess they made a mistake and have now put it in the correct catagory.

I only hope all my low scores don''t kill this story because of this error.

I apologize for calling you a dufus since the misidentification was not your fault. By the way, your story was good with some nice twists and turns in it. I just expected to see the family get it on. It would be cool if you would write something like this for the incest category. I didn't give you a score so no worries on that count. I either give a "5" or else I don't inflict a score. I don't give many scores. Sorry for my bad manners. AnHoa Rifleman

"Catagories" and "Tags", This is what upsets you people.

Really? Great story Dave110256!

If it was in the incest category, thenthats sad, but they should stil know a good story when they see one, no matter what category its in. They should appreciate that. Id like to say, that im very sorry about that,but for my lack of not reading anything on this site for a whil,i didnt see that. So dont woory dave, its in the groupsex category now, i just hope that you will get in the top 3, cause you deserve it. Even though there will be hundreds. Even if someone likes incest stories more than groupsex stories, they shuld at least give it a good score for it being a good story nonetheless. Ill give it a 5. Good luck in the competition!

-A.

hot story, wish you hadn't forgotten marcy existed sometime in the middle of the yarn.

One of the best "family stories" A follow up story should include the 'children'

i want more marcy stories.. could you please provide some?

Interesting story, mom and dad kinda screwed over their son. Huge downside of f they got caught by him.