All Comments on 'An Erotic Tale Ch. 02'

I'm loving this story...just made my heart melt.....not to mention..sizzling HOT!! Awwww....very cute and romantic....I can't wait for the next chapter.

Loved it!! Cheers! (:

I loved that Mike followed Carson home the next morning and was calm about his running off. To me, that made the whole chapter, and set up the rest of the story. It takes a secure person not to freak out the 'morning after' and Mike handled it well.

Let the wooing begin!! I loved the way you had Carson realized he needed to slow things down... not the typical turn. Having Mike agree to court him is just awsome. Two characters with outstanding traits, well done. I look forward to your next chapter.

Peace and joy,

Shell

I'm loving it, really looking forward to reading the next chapter.

this is great. can't wait for the next chapters :-)

Love it! pls pls pls don't keep us waiting.....like nomoretears00 does. l actually check up on nomoretears00's chapters abt 103 times a day. trust me! Please be nicer to us. wink wink!

Trying to figure out how and when mike knew it was carson's first time or am I reading too far into this? It's like mike knew all about Carson being a virgin, and no conversation ever took place.

Carson tells Mike he is not experienced in relationships and has never been with anyone before, when they go out on their first date ( the conversation at the restaurant). Hope that clears it up somewhat :D

, I want you with a hunger I've never experienced before. I can't explain it, but you bring out the caveman in me. The thought of anyone else touching you, tasting you fucking you, drives me insane," Mike practically growled.

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